Talk:SpongeBob SquarePants season 1/GA1
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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Taylor Trescott in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Taylor Trescott (talk · contribs) 03:11, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
Hi, I'll review this. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 03:11, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
This looks close to GA, in my opinion. I put it on hold.
- No dablinks, but this link (ref #9) is dead for me.
- Remove link. I think the link was misused as the source republished at http://www.reuters.com/article/2009/01/19/idUS145869+19-Jan-2009+PRN20090119 and http://www.highbeam.com/doc/1G1-193554130.html does not say anything about what is written there. Mediran (t • c) 10:16, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
- The lead has some citations. These can be left off, since everything here later appears in the article's body.
- I hope I could but it is just WP:LEADCITE has something to say about this because there are some likely to challenged info or quotations that need to have immediate sources for immediate verification. Well I think that's that. Mediran (t • c) 10:16, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
- We knew Doug fromRocko Missing a space here
- The plots in the season section are pretty tiny. Looking at some featured articles on TV seasons (Supernatural (season 1), South Park (season 13), Parks and Recreation (season 1)) show me most are quite bigger than this; they should probably be expanded a little.
- The first season of SpongeBob SquarePants was well received by media critics. I think we know this is the first season of SpongeBob. How about just The season was well received...
- Drymon said "'Help Wanted' had to be left off[...]" This quote doesn't really add anything; the previous sentence is based on something Drymon said too, so the reader already knows that the episode was left off.
Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 22:01, 11 December 2013 (UTC)