Talk:Rodrigues solitaire
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Quotes edit
Might as well quote the few accounts at length, they're in the public domain, and most books about the bird I've read publish them in full. FunkMonk (talk) 04:32, 26 June 2012 (UTC)
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 23:00, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
Looks like a very interesting article. Happy to offer a review. J Milburn (talk) 23:00, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- "and went extinct by the mid-1700s" went... in..., or was... by..., I'd say. Perhaps "had gone by", but that's a bit passive.
- I chose "was extinct by".
- "oiseau bleu" Are bird names not considered proper nouns on Wikipedia, generally? There are some other examples in that paragraph which need fixing.
- While Leguat's prose is quite striking, two issues arise. Firstly, and this may sound an odd thing to say, it was presumably written in French. As such, we are not "preserving" anything when we use the archaic language and punctuation, and so it could reasonably be updated. However, secondly, a heavy reliance on blockquotes is not really an appropriate writing style for an encyclopedia entry. Might I recommend the use of a template like this for some of the finer lines, while keeping the pertinent details in the main article body (but making it clear where the information is coming from). This would certainly be the best way to approach the issue in the description section, at least.
- You're right about the archaic language, but I thought it would be "original research" or something if I fixed it. But I believe the wording has been updated in later editions of the book, so I'll see if I can substitute the quotes with some of those. As for the manner of quoting, I was thinking I could maybe break it up in smaller pieces, and add some commentary from modern sources in between? I've added such comments after the huge chunk of text, but it could easily be dispersed. This quoting style was used in the FA Mary Anning, see under here[1] I think it would be a bit of a shame to remove too much of the quotes, since every source about the bird quote the accounts at length, and still paraphrase it extremely closely in addition. There simply isn't much else known about the bird.
- I understand precisely what you're saying, and I actually reviewed that article at FAC. I don't personally object too enormously to it, I'm just aware that others would see it as an inappropriate writing style for a biological article. If you're copying the style of the secondary sources, then please, leave it how it is. I would like to see more said in "Wikipedia's" voice, so it's something to consider, but it isn't the end of the world. J Milburn (talk) 10:47, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- You're right about the archaic language, but I thought it would be "original research" or something if I fixed it. But I believe the wording has been updated in later editions of the book, so I'll see if I can substitute the quotes with some of those. As for the manner of quoting, I was thinking I could maybe break it up in smaller pieces, and add some commentary from modern sources in between? I've added such comments after the huge chunk of text, but it could easily be dispersed. This quoting style was used in the FA Mary Anning, see under here[1] I think it would be a bit of a shame to remove too much of the quotes, since every source about the bird quote the accounts at length, and still paraphrase it extremely closely in addition. There simply isn't much else known about the bird.
- "to make a point of moral." This doesn't make sense
- "Alexandre Guy Pingré did not encounter any Solitaires when he visited Rodrigues to observe the 1761 transit of Venus, though he had been told they still survived, but his friend Pierre Charles Le Monnier named the star constellation Turdus Solitarius after the bird, to commemorate the journey." Sentence could do with being split
- Done.
- I find the article lacking in any kind of accurate description of the size of the birds; just comparisons to others. As we have full skeletons, this is known, I assume?
- Whoops, don't know how I missed that, added!
- Added.
Very well sourced and illustrated; all sources seem reliable, all illustrations PD. A very interesting and well-written article. J Milburn (talk) 23:38, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick review, I thought I'd have to wait for months! I'll go ahead and fix the issues you mention now... FunkMonk (talk) 23:41, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
- I've added some comments above. Apart from that, is there anything you think should be expanded? I could very well have overlooked something, but I've almost exhausted the sources, what's left is more specific info about Leguat himself and Rodrigues, as well as osteological details. A few more lines could perhaps be written about the somewhat complex taxonomic history. FunkMonk (talk) 00:35, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- Detailed osteological details (or, more commonly, details of dentition) are quite common in high-quality articles on extinct species. It could have its own subsection in the description, so that the more tedious details were kept out of what would interest the non-specialist reader. It's certainly something to add if you're looking towards FAC (which, by the way, I'd recommend; there's a good community of biologists who would be willing to help you out; for instance, Casliber writes on both birds and extinct creatures, Ucucha has written much on extinct mammals, Jimfbleak writes a lot about birds). Adding to the taxonomic history is good; for instance, I find myself wondering what the generic name refers to. A few other nitpicks-
- I've added some comments above. Apart from that, is there anything you think should be expanded? I could very well have overlooked something, but I've almost exhausted the sources, what's left is more specific info about Leguat himself and Rodrigues, as well as osteological details. A few more lines could perhaps be written about the somewhat complex taxonomic history. FunkMonk (talk) 00:35, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- The details about the "knuckle" are seemingly repeated over and over.
- We also have no account of what the species lived off food-wise, as far as I can see. My apologies if I've skimmed over it in a blockquote.
- I think I'll try to go all the way now, if you have more suggestions you would otherwise leave for FA, I'd be happy to see if I can implement it already. I'll add some of its skeletal distinctions, and see if I can find an etymology, as well as the other things you suggested. Do you know of a bird FA/GA which explains skeletal features in an exemplary manner? I've been looking at Great Auk, but there is hardly anything. Perhaps Huia is better. As for diet, this sentence was already in the article: "They perhaps lived mainly in the woods, and fed on dates, seeds and leaves." But maybe I can find something more, though nothing is known outside Leguat's description. Thanks again! FunkMonk (talk) 20:59, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
- Still needs some work and expansion, but I've restructured the article a bit, and I think it works much better. I realised much info is left out of recent articles about the bird. I found the only description (and a very useful lithograph) of actual preserved gizzard stones in an 1879 article, even though that's some pretty essential stuff. I couldn't find other translations of the book, though. Maybe there are none. FunkMonk (talk) 06:33, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- I think I'll try to go all the way now, if you have more suggestions you would otherwise leave for FA, I'd be happy to see if I can implement it already. I'll add some of its skeletal distinctions, and see if I can find an etymology, as well as the other things you suggested. Do you know of a bird FA/GA which explains skeletal features in an exemplary manner? I've been looking at Great Auk, but there is hardly anything. Perhaps Huia is better. As for diet, this sentence was already in the article: "They perhaps lived mainly in the woods, and fed on dates, seeds and leaves." But maybe I can find something more, though nothing is known outside Leguat's description. Thanks again! FunkMonk (talk) 20:59, 9 July 2012 (UTC)
The article's coming along beautifully.
- The lead's now looking a little short; I think it could be expanded.
- "Lack of women made the refugees construct a boat, in which they sailed on to Mauritius." Interesting, but I'm not sure why this is relevant
- The description section could probably support a separate subsection giving detailed descriptions of the skeleton.
Contrary to what you said in the peer review, I definitely think that there's potentially enough material for a featured article here. I'd recommend working on the three suggestions above, and then having a few others give it a look over before nominating it at FAC. Casliber and Jimfbleak are both users who may be willing to have a look at this article, and others who may be interested include Sasata (mostly interested in fungi, but has collaborated on other biology articles), Ucucha (written a lot about extinct animals, and has an interest in Madagascar) and Maky (very interested in lemurs, but has written on subfossil lemurs). Back to the good article candidacy, I'm happy to promote this now if you're happy that it's ready, or happy to wait and continue to offer suggestions as you expand it further. The choice is yours. J Milburn (talk) 21:07, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, yeah, there's definitely more info in 19th century sources, especially Alfred Newton's osteological descriptions (perhaps Richard Owen's could be used too), so I'll give them a read and expand accordingly. From what I've read, this article already seems to be the most comprehensive "popular" account of this bird in existence, so it wouldn't hurt if it passed here, I'll continue working on it in any case. FunkMonk (talk) 21:45, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- Ah, Richard Owen- probably my town's greatest export! I'll pass the article at this time, but I'm available on my talk page if I can be of any further help. Fantastic work on this article, and I hope I'll see it at FAC at some point in the future. J Milburn (talk) 21:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- Hah, you can be proud of that! Incidentally, it was apparently Owen's usurpation of a shipment of Dodo bones originally meant for Alfred Newton that made him focus on the Solitaire instead of the Dodo. Not sure if that could be mentioned somewhere in the article, but it's interesting enough for a whole paper having been written about it. And thanks again! FunkMonk (talk) 22:00, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
- Ah, Richard Owen- probably my town's greatest export! I'll pass the article at this time, but I'm available on my talk page if I can be of any further help. Fantastic work on this article, and I hope I'll see it at FAC at some point in the future. J Milburn (talk) 21:55, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
Pre-FAC feedback edit
Could go into a little more detail on the taxonomy - i.e. on what basis the relationships have been determined (osteology/genetic etc.) Much like raphinae article, which itself could have alot more detail...Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:44, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, there's a little about skeletal similarities and differences to the Dodo and other pigeons in the description section, do you mean that such should be in the taxonomy section instead? The Newton brothers wrote that the Solitaire was intermediate between the Dodo and regular pigeons in anatomy, that could maybe be interesting to add there as well. FunkMonk (talk) 15:20, 22 July 2012 (UTC)
- Good point (damn I didn't register that) - that material looks good where it is, maybe just skim on similarities differences in osteology only WRT classification in taxonomy....Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:55, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
- I did add some taxonomy stuff since last, don't know if it's enough, but the annoying thing is that the sources seem to compare the Solitaire to the Dodo, and then just take the Solitaire's relation to the pigeons as given through its relation with the Dodo. Something like the systematic comparison paragraph[2] I just added to the Dodo article is probably what you had in mind, but I just can't find such in the Solitaire sources... FunkMonk (talk) 21:05, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
- Good point (damn I didn't register that) - that material looks good where it is, maybe just skim on similarities differences in osteology only WRT classification in taxonomy....Casliber (talk · contribs) 20:55, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
Verification edit
Some of the in-line references to book sources to not permit easy verification, which mignt not be consistent with WP:MOS nor FA status. Examples: Snowman (talk) 20:07, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
- 1. ^ a b c d e f g h i j k l m n Cheke & Hume 2008, pp. 45–168. (page range is too large) Snowman (talk) 20:05, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
- 3. Hutchinson, G. E. (1954). "MARGINALIA". American Scientist 42 (2): 300–308. doi:10.2307/27826550. (dead link on my system today) Snowman (talk) 20:07, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
- Well, again, if it wasn't brought up during two separate FACs, why should it be a problem now? FunkMonk (talk) 20:35, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
New source edit
Joylon C. Parish (2012). "The Dodo and the Solitaire: A Natural History" ISBN 9780253000996 (see [3]) Sasata (talk) 22:45, 1 February 2013 (UTC)
Landscape edit
Descriptions of the landscape and trees on the island might help to explain more about the bird's environment. Leguat described the landscape in his book. Snowman (talk) 20:44, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
- I think a modern source would be more appropriate for that, since most of the plants still exist. There should be something in Cheke Hume 2008. FunkMonk (talk) 23:33, 7 January 2014 (UTC)
- Leguat described the island at the time when the bird lived there. He described tall trees providing a continuous overhead canopy, and I presume this is what the vegetation in the colour reconstruction is based on (and Leguat's book is mentioned in the image description on Commons). I have recently uploaded some modern holiday photographs from flickr to Commons showing a rather treeless Rodrigues landscape, which I presume gives some idea of the destruction of the forests. I had the idea that showing a modern picture of the treeless landscape would help the "Relationship with humans" or "Extinction" sections. It would also provide a little more colour (mainly green) to the article, which has mainly black and white photographs. Snowman (talk) 12:16, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
- Well, there's not really any room left for images. And it would be a bit too synthesis-like to add info that is not directly related to the bird/not discussed in most sources about the bird. FunkMonk (talk) 12:42, 8 January 2014 (UTC)
- OK. Here is an image of the Rodrigues landscape in 2004; File:Rodrigues Island, Mauritius-17May2004 (5).jpg. Snowman (talk) 12:49, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
- We now have an image showing the bird and a background, made by the author of this paper: http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1080/08912963.2014.954569 FunkMonk (talk) 17:19, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- OK. Here is an image of the Rodrigues landscape in 2004; File:Rodrigues Island, Mauritius-17May2004 (5).jpg. Snowman (talk) 12:49, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
Broken citation link edit
Error on page: "de Lozoya, A. V. (2003). "An unnoticed painting of a white Dodo". Journal of the History of Collections 15 (2): 201–210. doi:10.1093/jhc/15.2.201. Harv error: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFde_Lozoya2003. edit" and footnote 8: " Lozoya & Valledor 2003. Harv error: link from #CITEREFLozoyaValledor2003 doesn't point to any citation." —Gaff ταλκ 23:44, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
- I guess this means the "refnames" should be synchronised? FunkMonk (talk) 12:44, 28 November 2014 (UTC)
- There is a tool at User:Ucucha/HarvErrors to see these types of errors. I found out about it here: Wikipedia:Help_desk#Citation_help. There is still one broken link on this page, and several on the Dodo page. I will fix them when I have a chance. —Gaff ταλκ 17:05, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, I find this citation style a bit confusing, and prefer the one used on for example hoopoe starling, much simpler to use and maintain. I'd even prefer if the style here and on dodo was changed back to that... FunkMonk (talk) 17:11, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- Fixed on this page, will fix dodo later. Funny: I changed the citation style on the gopher article to match this page and the dodo, because I thought it was your preference & I'm still learning how to write good articles... —Gaff ταλκ 17:22, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks, I find this citation style a bit confusing, and prefer the one used on for example hoopoe starling, much simpler to use and maintain. I'd even prefer if the style here and on dodo was changed back to that... FunkMonk (talk) 17:11, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
- There is a tool at User:Ucucha/HarvErrors to see these types of errors. I found out about it here: Wikipedia:Help_desk#Citation_help. There is still one broken link on this page, and several on the Dodo page. I will fix them when I have a chance. —Gaff ταλκ 17:05, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
Restoring FA citation style edit
I have received a request on my talk page to restore this article's citation style to the style that was in use during the article's development, until shortly after it was promoted to FA. Just after it was promoted, significant changes to the citation style were introduced, in contravention of WP:CITEVAR, and since then, the citation style has become a bit of a muddle. I propose to return the article to the original citation style, per the CITEVAR guideline. – Jonesey95 (talk) 16:26, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks! Feel free to ask if you have any questions about individual citations. FunkMonk (talk) 16:39, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
- Not sure if this was forgotten or how, Jonesey95? FunkMonk (talk) 03:56, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- FunkMonk, I simply forgot. You wouldn't believe how easy it is to forget things. Anyway, I have restored the citation formatting per the above and cleaned it up a bit. Please check my edits and look at the diff VERY carefully; it was a lot of work, and a lot of detail, and it is quite possible that I misplaced one or more page ranges or whole citations. I recommend that each time a short citation was replaced, that you check to ensure that my change results in the same full citation being referred to.
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- If these edits look good to you, I can do the same at Dodo. – Jonesey95 (talk) 06:31, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot, and no problem, this article hasn't been featured on the main page yet anyway. Certainly looks like a lot of work, and the page ranges seem to match up. The only question I have is about how to treat multiple page ranges from the same source. I didn't seem to have that yet in the pre-citation style change version of this article, but what I have done since (following advice at some FACs) can be seen in for example the Broad-billed parrot article (under "Works cited"). Any thoughts on this (now different page ranges from the same books are shown with the full citations each time)? Could maybe also be solved by just giving more than one range in a single citation, such as "40-45, 130-132". Fixing dodo would of course be nice, but no rush with that, since it was TFA long ago. FunkMonk (talk) 11:53, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- User:FunkMonk, I just ran across your unanswered inquiry. My understanding is that in order to avoid duplicating full citations per WP:DUPCITES, what you did in Broad-billed parrot was
- <ref name=4to17Hume2007>Hume, J. P. (2007). pp. 4–17.</ref>
- and placed the full citation in the Cited Works section.
- Disadvantages:
- Plain text references mean that the full reference will not be shown when the user hovers the mouse over the short citation.
- Automated detection of citation errors is not possible with plain text short footnotes.
- Alternative:
- Use the harv or sfn templates in the inline style. That is, the full citation for Hume is placed inside a ref tag with the page number declared outside of the cite book template. You then use the sfn template for all other pages. For illustration, I edited Broad-billed parrot using the alternative I described for all the Hume2007 footnotes. Comments? If ok, I will change over the Chuke/Hume citations to do the same. Otherwise, I will revert the article. If agreeable, this by the way is how I would avoid WP:DUPCITES in the Dodo article. J JMesserly (talk) 00:48, 19 March 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot, and no problem, this article hasn't been featured on the main page yet anyway. Certainly looks like a lot of work, and the page ranges seem to match up. The only question I have is about how to treat multiple page ranges from the same source. I didn't seem to have that yet in the pre-citation style change version of this article, but what I have done since (following advice at some FACs) can be seen in for example the Broad-billed parrot article (under "Works cited"). Any thoughts on this (now different page ranges from the same books are shown with the full citations each time)? Could maybe also be solved by just giving more than one range in a single citation, such as "40-45, 130-132". Fixing dodo would of course be nice, but no rush with that, since it was TFA long ago. FunkMonk (talk) 11:53, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- If these edits look good to you, I can do the same at Dodo. – Jonesey95 (talk) 06:31, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
- Not sure if this was forgotten or how, Jonesey95? FunkMonk (talk) 03:56, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
Pixelated illustration edit
This illustration[6] was added by SERGIO GAUCI, and though I appreciate the effort, the image is so pixelated as to be useless (what does it add?), especially since we already have two illustrations of higher quality.[7][8] Furthermore, the image shows blue and green parts, which does not match the historical descriptions (saying it was grey and brown), a result of seemingly being derived from a photo of the Nicobar pigeon. But I am willing to discuss this, and hope others will add their opinions. FunkMonk (talk) 00:57, 19 December 2018 (UTC)