Talk:Little Dee
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The Semi-colon Wars
I don't want to get in a revision war over a semi-colon, but I just didn't like it.
Ted is sensible, a parent, a mediator.
This is a list of things Ted is.
Ted is sensible; a parent, a mediator.
The first part stands on its own but the second can't; it's not a sentence. Nit-picky, but legitimate (I feel). --KSnortum 07:21, 31 December 2005 (UTC)
- The first version works perfectly well as a list of Ted's qualities as far as I can see. Lee M 15:57, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
"Fiercely ?"
"Ted is fiercely protective of Dee"... Ted does not seem like a very "fierce" character to me. The only time he ever got very "fierce" was when Vachel tried to take his chocolate croissant and it was still only meant as a joke. I changed "Fiercely" to "Quite".
