Talk:Fusō-class battleship/GA1
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Reviewer: —Ed!(talk) 19:14, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written:
- Comments
- Why did Fusō undergo two upgrades while Yamashiro only one? Was it needed for something part way through the upgrade? You should put a line or two in specifying why this was the case.
- Oddly enough, none of my sources specify the gap. My guess would be that they realized halfway through Yamashiro's that they'd missed some stuff on Fuso that would have proved useful, so finished her that way and then went back and added it onto Fuso later, but I don't know for sure. I'll keep looking through what I have, though I doubt I'll find anything. Cam (Chat)(Prof) 01:21, 26 November 2010 (UTC)
- Could you provide the names of the two ships in original Japanese?
- Please put all of the references into {{cite book}} templates.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable:
- Pass
- It is broad in its coverage:
- Pass
- It follows the neutral point of view policy:
- Pass
- It is stable:
- Pass
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
- Pass
- Overall:
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