Talk:Evan Bayh 2008 presidential campaign/GA2
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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Gary King in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Gary King (talk) 21:10, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- "the latter began thinking about a possible run for president in 2008" – perhaps something like "the latter considered the possibility of running for president in 2008" instead. More descriptive, as "began thinking" isn't as evocative.
Done - I don't think "homestate" is ever used as one word? Done
- For the first image of Bayh, please provide a more descriptive caption, such as "Official Senate portrait of Bayh" (if that's accurate). Done
- In quotations, the punctuation at the end of the quote goes outside the quotation if the quote is a sentence fragment (per WP:PUNC, I believe). Done
Gary King (talk) 21:10, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. It is appreciated. --William S. Saturn (talk) 22:06, 18 April 2010 (UTC)