Talk:Campaign advertising

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Why does this article repeatedly talk about results in ways such as "a 49 to 1 state victory" and "lost by over thirty states." Whoever wrote this article clearly did not understand how US elections are decided. 99.32.19.55 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 22:07, 6 November 2011 (UTC).

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Article Evaluation for Class Assignment

Question: Are there any recent developments in campaign advertising regulations as of the latest election cycles in different countries?

Evaluation:

Lead Section

The article's introductory sentence is effective as it defines the article's topic of campaign advertising in a simple but informative manner. The lead does describe each of the article's major sections, however, it goes into excessive detail when discussing differences in campaign advertising laws across countries. These differences should have been summarized more concisely and delved into in the body of the article instead. The lead does not include information that is not present in the article.

Content

The article's content is relevant to the topic, although it lacks detail about different campaign advertising strategies. The content is largely up-to-date, but the addition of more modern examples of campaign advertising campaigns and new regulations would provide a more relevant discussion of the topic. However, none of the article's content is distracting and it is all relevant.

Tone and Balance

The writing of the article has a neutral tone and the author does not try to persuade the reader to believe in any specific position on campaign advertising. However, there is a more substantial focus on campaign advertising examples and regulations in Western countries, with a particular focus on the United States. Countries from other regions receive little to no focus in comparison. Thus, a Eurocentric, American viewpoint is overrepresented in the article while the perspectives of countries in Asia, Africa, and South America are underrepresented. The article references studies at different points and accurately attributes information to these studies rather than presenting these findings as correct or incorrect. It does not acknowledge any bias present within the studies it references. Additionally, the article does not acknowledge whether the studies included are majority or minority viewpoints.

Sources and References

Not all facts in the article are backed up by reliable secondary sources. Rather, there are tags of "citation needed" following several pieces of information presented in the article. The sources are for the most part thorough as they represent a variety of source types and cover a range of subtopics related to campaign advertising, including regulations, case analyses, and current events. However, several sources are from several years ago, especially in the early 2010s. This raises concerns that the article does not adequately cover the modern intricacies of campaign advertising and recent developments in the fields that have occurred since the 2010s as digital media and advertising has been continually evolving. The sources, similar to the article's content, could be more diverse as they tend to come from Western, particularly American, authors and do not equally represent the voices of historically marginalized or international authors. Additionally, many of the sources are news articles and the use of peer-reviewed articles and studies could improve the accuracy of these sources. The links in the sources section do work and the sources that are linked support the claims in the article they are attached to.

Organization and Writing Quality

The article is well-written, as it uses a neutral tone and clear language that makes it easy to follow. There are no grammatical or spelling errors. The article is well-organized, as it is separated into the subtopics of history, regulation, and effects with additional subsections for specific countries. However, there could be more explanation as to the differences between the "Regulation" section and "Regulation of Political Advertising" section.

Images and Media

There are images at the beginning of the article that enhance the writing, but they are not evenly included throughout the rest of the article, especially for countries outside of the United States. The captions for the images are detailed and adequately explain what each image shows. The images seem to adhere to Wikipedia copyright violations and are displayed in a visually appealing manner.

Talk Page Discussion

There are minimal conversations going on in the article's talk page, with most of them discussing the modification of external links and archives. There is also a short conversation about an error in the way the author discusses election results. The article is rated C-class and is part of the WikiProjects of Elections and Referendums, Marketing and Advertising, and Politics.

Overall Impressions

The article's overall status is that it needs improvement in fully covering the details of campaign advertising and representing a wide range of viewpoints and countries. Its strengths are its formal and neutral writing style as well as the detail with which it discusses American campaign advertising. However, it could be improved by applying the same level of detail to discuss campaign advertising in other countries. It is underdeveloped as there are subtopics of campaign advertising that it either does not cover or glosses over, including advertising techniques and controversies about the subject.

Pinkdolphin47 (talk) 06:01, 29 August 2022 (UTC)

United Kingdom still listed as EU member state

The section below still lists the United Kingdom as an EU member state. This ended with its formal departure of the EU. The United Kingdom should have its own section anyway as it has not, as far as I'm aware, followed EU law on political campaigning. You know, since it gave the world representative democracy well before the EU existed.

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Campaign_advertising&action=edit&section=4 92.5.78.121 (talk) 21:46, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: Money and Politics

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 29 August 2023 and 14 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Emraeah (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Tmayas01.

— Assignment last updated by Tuk28507 (talk) 18:56, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

Effects of Political Advertising Section

Possible addition to this article:

Lead[edit]

The name of an organization can allow campaigners to separate their political interests from their individual identity.

Article body

For example, American Civil Rights Institute is an anti-affirmative action group that sounds similar to the American Civil Liberties Union. The two organizations have opposing views on the issue in realty, but the public may confuse the two as sharing the same interests due to their names. These unknown groups also have an advantage of seemingly having no previous associations with voters, as it does not readily reveal the leadership of the organizations to the public. Unknown interests groups are generally perceived as credible. They can also have names that project a sense of shared, common values or interests. However, they can be deceiving as many of these groups' leadership and/or sponsors is actors with less democratic policy than it seems. For example, Californians to Protect Our Right to Vote is sponsored by Pacific Gas & Electronic Company. In these cases, the nonprofits names are able to project trustworthiness and expertise while shielding its deceiving donors operating it.[1]

References[edit]

Lesenyie, M. (2020). Reading the Fine Print: Issue Advertisements and the Persuasive Effects of Campaign Finance Disclosures. American Politics Research, 48(1), 155–174. https://doi.org/10.1177/1532673X19865881 Emraeah (talk) 22:40, 26 September 2023 (UTC)