Talk:Bassem Tamimi/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 20:24, 20 May 2013 (UTC) I shall review this article. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:24, 20 May 2013 (UTC)
Lead edit
Excellent.
Infobox edit
Fine.
Background edit
"Al-Tamimi was ten weeks old at the time of the Israeli occupation of the West Bank in June 1967 and hid with his mother in a cave during the conflict." Please wikilink the appropriate sections of the Six-Day War.
"Also a grassroots activist, he organized weekly demonstrations to protest the seizure of the village's well by the nearby Israeli settlement of Halamish, established in 1977." If you mean his mother was too, please state this.
Excellent section.
March 2011 arrest and trial edit
Superb section. What I will say is that if you have recorded reactions from any other countries/entities, please include them.
- Unfortunately, no, only the European Union quotation. It's possible some other Middle Eastern nations made comment, but I haven't found reference to this anywhere. (I'm linguistically limited to only English and French coverage, though, not Hebrew or Arabic.) -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
- This is fine, I simply wondered. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:45, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, no, only the European Union quotation. It's possible some other Middle Eastern nations made comment, but I haven't found reference to this anywhere. (I'm linguistically limited to only English and French coverage, though, not Hebrew or Arabic.) -- Khazar2 (talk) 01:03, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
October 2012 arrest edit
"Bassem was released in early 2013." Just so that a reader is clear, please place this sentence at the end of the prior paragraph.
All else is good.
Personal life edit
This section is fine
Conclusion edit
I salute both your efforts and justifiable enthusiasm pertaining to this article. Excellent job! Once the outstanding issues are addressed, I will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 17:43, 21 May 2013 (UTC)